The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
What has been depicted in the bar chart is the popularity of five celebrities who are active on one of the social media platforms, namely,
Instegram
from 2018 to 2021. Correct your spelling
Instagram
Overall
, it is clear that
in 2018, although
Selena Gomez had the most followers on Instagram, this
title was taken by Cristian Ronaldo
at the end
. Moreover
, Cristian had the highest number of influences, while
that of the Rock was the least.
In 2018, It is
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was
attention
of Add an article
the attention
people
on Instagram, which is one of the social media feeds, who were above 100 million
, whereas
that of the Rock was less than 100M. In addition
, approximately 110 M of individuals sought Ronaldo
and Ariana Grande while
Kylie was a close second at around 100 million
.
In 2021, about 310 million
of
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people
were
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favored
Cristin Change the spelling
favoured
Ronaldo
, although
Selena was less poplar
than Correct your spelling
popular
Ronaldo
by nearly fifty million
people
. Also
, the number of individuals who followed Ariana and Kylie on Instagram were
similar (250 M). And come to think of it, after Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Ronaldo
, the Rock was in the
second place and the number of Correct article usage
apply
people
supported
him exceeded 250 Correct pronoun usage
who supported
million
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