The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles.

The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles.
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The diagram illustrates how the recycled
glass
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bottles
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are made.
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, there are 3 main stages in the process of producing
glass
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containers, beginning with gathering a large amount of
bottles
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and ending with new products entering the market to be purchased. The first
stage
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is when
bottles
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go to the collection place and
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are transported in trucks to the cleaning plant. During
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time, the
bottles
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are cleaned with water and
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sorted into different categories based on their colours (clear, green, brown) and prepared for the following
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. By
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stage
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, water
bottles
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will be transferred to the recycling plant for the generation process. At
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point, they will be heated in a furnace and turn into liquid form. After being melted, recycled
glass
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is combined with new liquid
glass
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are molded into a solid shape of
bottles
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. Once the final
stage
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has been completed, new
bottles
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are ready to be used, entering the market again, waiting for customers to purchase.
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