The provided pie charts show statistics of granted degrees at the National University from 1990 to 2010.
The pie graph gives information about the proportion of accepted degrees at the National University in 1990, 2000, and 2010 divided into
computer
science
, medicine
, law
, and bussiness
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business
department
.
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departments
Overall
, computer
science
is the most popular school in 2010 and 2000. However
, in 1990 computer
science
and business
have
the same admission number. Wrong verb form
had
Furthermore
, law
school student
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students
is
the least popular Correct subject-verb agreement
are
between
all Change preposition
among
department
in all Fix the agreement mistake
departments
year
.
In 2010, Fix the agreement mistake
years
Law
and Correct article usage
the Law
business
department
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departments
share
the same amount of total scholars. Meanwhile, Wrong verb form
shared
computer
science
have
the most number of students and Change the verb form
has
medicine
has the least number compared with computer
science
but have
the most scholars referred to Correct subject-verb agreement
has
law
and business
.On the other hand
, medicine
is unpopular compared with computer
science
in the year
2000 and 1990.
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years
To conclude
, computer
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the computer
science
population is continue
to Change the verb form
continues
growing
over Change the form of the verb
grow
the
time from 1990 to 2010. Correct article usage
apply
Nevertheles
, Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
medicine
and law
have fluctactive
growth but Correct your spelling
lucrative
business
pupils is
shrinking over the period.Change the verb form
are
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