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The chart shows the unemploymsent situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The chart shows the unemploymsent situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
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The line graph provides the rate of individuals unemployed in
Austalia
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Australia
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 per
quarter
 of the year in 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the highest rate of unemployment was in Rural places in the first period,
while
 Urban
areas
 were the lowest. It is
intresting
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interesting
 to notice that in the first
quarter
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quarter,
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 Urban
areas
 had approximately 2.5 of unemployment,
Whereas
 in Rural places
were
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was
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 around 6.5
percent
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per cent
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. The proportion of unemployment increased slightly in the first
quarter
.
Afterthat
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After that
, there is
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a signifcant
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signifcant
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significant
 fall in the second
quarter
 of the year.
Moreover
, Rural
areas
 had
increase
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an increase
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 in the same period.
For example
, it was almost 4.5
percent
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per cent
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,
then
increase
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increased
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 to nearly 5.5
percent
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per cent
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 in the following year.
In addition
, there was
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a consderable
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consderable
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considerable
 rise in
Uban
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the Uban
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areas
 it was around 2
percent
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per cent
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,
then
 became 4
percent
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per cent
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 in the same period. In conclusion, the lowest rate was in Urban
areas
, but Rural places were the highest.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quarter, areas, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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