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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 to 2007.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 to 2007.
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The
shown
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line chart demonstrates the amount of
visitors
 from various countries
visited
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who visited
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to
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three different spots in a European nation in the time period of 1987 to 2007. The three different spots are the coast, mountains and lakes visited by thousands of
visitors
 during the 20 years of
timeline
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the timeline
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 .
Most
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The most
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 favourable visited area by tourists from 1987 to 2007 is the coast and the number of
visitors
 40,000 is the highest visited
place
 in 1987. There is a decrease
of
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in
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 tourists visiting the coast from 1987 to 1992 and a constant increase in the number
visitors
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of visitors
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 from 1992 to 2007 which is nearly 75,000
people
. The lakes
is
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were
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 the least visited
place
 than
other
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the other
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 two in 1987 with a sudden
rose
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 to 2002 and became the highest visited
place
 in
similar
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a similar
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 year. But the amount of
people
 visiting the lakes
drop down
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dropped
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 between 2002 to 2007. The mountains
is
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were
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 the second highest visited area in 1987 and with a slow rise in
people
 visiting
this
 spot
and
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became the lowest visited
place
 in 2007 with a total increase in
number
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a number
the number
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 of
people
 from 20,000 to nearly 35,000.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, place, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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