Some people argue the government should support the funds for arts, while others suggest the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that the government should shoulder the responsibility of providing economic support for the arts.

On the contrary

, opponents suggest that healthcare and education should be given priority

instead

.There seem to be valid reasons on both sides of the argument. On the one hand,advocates insist that the state ought to invest in aesthetic industries since they can bring economic benefits.To be specific,these fields,

such

as fashion design,

art

education,

art

auction, graphic design,conventional painting and so on,

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can contribute to employment and alleviate the unemployment rate.What’s more,people

also

believe that various and unique

art

forms could be regarded as symbols of a nation’s culture,especially traditional ones.

For example

,calligraphy is regarded as one of Chinese representatives,it can help citizens build a sense of cultural and national identity,

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,it will significantly promote social cohesion.

On the other hand

,opponents stress that we should sacrifice arts,a luxury enjoyment,in exchange

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practical benefits that citizens can enjoy.By way of illustration,individuals will need to spend a lot of money without medical insurance

due to

the lack of medical resources and professionals.

Thus

the administration should increase the healthcare budget and increase access to general practitioners and mental healthcare, making sure the National Health Service works on a 7-day basis.Apart from that,education is

also

a vital aspect.

For instance

,the government need to increase the provision of free childcare,build more colleges and universities and improve access to tertiary learning since adolescent is related to their country’s future. Both two views seem to be reasonable,and I would say that in the case of developing countries,they should pay more attention to key areas relating to residents’ well-being

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since their public finances are not sufficient and infrastructure needs improvement as well.For those developed countries,they need to catch the importance of

art

and cultural soft power which can be greatly important in international competitions.