The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given representation illustrates the first 10th countries which both generate and use electricity by themselves in a period of a year in 2014.
Overall
, as can be seen, China takes the first place in each of which
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stands out is the reverse for Germany.
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with, China is a leader of
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more than 50000. Moreover
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electricity, the USA is followed by around 40000 in both fields, Change preposition
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Russia has third place, other ones use and generate nearly the same amount
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slightly less than 5000 each

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