The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The two diagrams depict a range of transformations that were carried out on an
island
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.
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,
this
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region underwent diverse remarkable developments. The improvements of the
island
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were completely environmentally friendly because the number of trees remained unchanged after completing modernization. On the commercial side, a restaurant was opened in the northwest of the
island
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. With regard to residential areas, several accommodations were constructed in the centre and west of the region. These buildings were connected with the footpaths.
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, the west accommodation is connected to the beach with a footpath.
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, a reception was built between accommodations. The reception is surrounded by vehicle tracks. As for recreational facilities, a swimming area was developed on the west of the
island
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, by the beach. In the southwest of
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region, a pier was established for boats. Considering green space, the location of the palm trees did not change and only a palm tree was relocated to the northeast of the
island
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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