The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

the diagram illustrates how many

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the tourist information office in one city received over 6 months in 2011.

Overall

, there was a dramatic increase in the

number

of

inquiries

received by one corporate in person and by telephone, with the in-person method witnessing the most significant rise.

While

a drop was seen in sending

inquiries

by letter or email,

in addition

,

this

method was the lowest procedure from

March

onward. The

number

of

inquiries

that the tourist information office received in in-person started at 400 in January,

then

it went up to 800

inquiries

in

March

.

While

by telephone was seen a slight decrease in February, after which it experienced a fair growth to 1000 ones in

march

.

Conversely

, under 800

inquiries

from the beginning went down to around 700 in the same period. From

March

to June, the

number

of

inquiries

received in person continued to soar up to 2000 in the latter

of

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month.

similarly

, the method by telephone

leveled

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off from

March

to April and

then

captured an increase to 1600 in Jun.

By contrast

, the

last

one kept going down to under 400 in May and

then

hovering at that

number

till June.