The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
the diagram illustrates how many
inquiries
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that
the tourist information office in one city received over 6 months in 2011.
Correct word choice
apply
Overall
, there was a dramatic increase in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
inquiries
received by one corporate in person and by telephone, with the in-person method witnessing the most significant rise. Use synonyms
While
a drop was seen in sending Linking Words
inquiries
by letter or email, Use synonyms
in addition
, Linking Words
this
method was the lowest procedure from Linking Words
March
onward.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
inquiries
that the tourist information office received in in-person started at 400 in January, Use synonyms
then
it went up to 800 Linking Words
inquiries
in Use synonyms
March
. Use synonyms
While
by telephone was seen a slight decrease in February, after which it experienced a fair growth to 1000 ones in Linking Words
march
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, under 800 Linking Words
inquiries
from the beginning went down to around 700 in the same period.
From Use synonyms
March
to June, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
inquiries
received in person continued to soar up to 2000 in the latter Use synonyms
of
month. Change preposition
apply
similarly
, the method by telephone Linking Words
leveled
off from Change the spelling
levelled
March
to April and Use synonyms
then
captured an increase to 1600 in Jun. Linking Words
By contrast
, the Linking Words
last
one kept going down to under 400 in May and Linking Words
then
hovering at that Linking Words
number
till June.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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