the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The diagrams illustrate the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the number of hours dedicated to housework in the span of about 20 years from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the bar chart demonstrates an increasing number in the ownership of household products
whereas
, there is a decline in the amount of time spent doing housework in the past years. Looking into details, in 1920 the usage of refrigerators was less than 5% which clined to
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percentage in 2019 as with vacuum cleaners, which was at 30% in the beginning. The data shows a constant rise in vacuum cleaners throughout the time. The utilization of washing machines has surged from 40% to about 75% in 1920 and 2019 respectively. As per the second illustration, hours spent on work at home dropped rapidly from 1920 to 2019 and we can see a gradual decrease later the years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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