The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

The chart below represents the total number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

To begin

with, country B had the highest rate on a board,

county

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E,

on the

contrary

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contrary,

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had the lowest.

Firstly

, land A reached the number of nearly 48 journals in 2003, followed by 45 in the year

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2005 and expected 38 per person in 2007.

Next,

country B increased their sales to the second biggest point in the chart, in 2003 and sold 48 and 45 publications in 2005 and 2007. The same happened to the citizenry C, the numbers changed from 38 in 2003 and 35 per individual in 2005, followed by 33 in 2007.

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with

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with this

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, country D which rate

raise

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rose

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from 18 sold magazines per person in 2003 to 23 in 2007. In comparison land E had the same position in two different years, they reached the point of 7 journals per individual in 2005.