The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
the given graph depicts information about emissions of carbon dioxide which were produced by single individuals in four different countries over a
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five-decade
five decade
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five-decade
period
from 1967 to 2007
after the analysis, it is clearly stated that the problem of carbon dioxide were
mostly found in Change the verb form
was
uk
almost Correct your spelling
UK
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quarter
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a quater
quater
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quarter
tonnes
in the year Change preposition
of tonnes
of
1967 Change preposition
apply
then
, it drop
gradually after three years after which, the number fell significantly Wrong verb form
dropped
during
1987 to 2007 Change preposition
from
similarly
, for swedan
the Correct your spelling
Sweden
emission
produced stood at nearly 9 million
tonnes
in 1967 then
it rose significantly almost 10 million
after which its value fell drastically throughout the period
furthermore
, italy
and Change the capitalization
Italy
portugal
showed the same pattern for carbon Change the capitalization
Portugal
emission
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emissions
however
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, however
portugal
started Change the capitalization
Portugal
from
2.5 Change preposition
with
million
tonnes
while
italy
made double Change the capitalization
Italy
of
it in producing the Change preposition
apply
emission
of Co2 after that, italy
increased drastically to 6 Change the capitalization
Italy
million
in 1977. a dip was seen between the period
after which the pattern showed upward
direction from 1987 to 2007 Correct article usage
an upward
in addition
, portugal
rose significantly too but in 1987 a small dip was seen after which it Change the capitalization
Portugal
surpassing
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surpassed
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Sweden
swedan
in producing Change the capitalization
Swedan
emission
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emissions
accounted
for 5 Wrong verb form
accounting
million
tonnes
overall
, it is vividly manifested that all four of them showed fluctuation throughout the period
but Correct your spelling
Sweden
swedan
and Change the capitalization
Swedan
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the Uk
Uk
had control over the Correct your spelling
UK
emission
over period
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the period
a period
while
the remaining countries showed upward directionv
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direction
directions
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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