The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons  where relevant
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the given graph depicts information about emissions of carbon dioxide which were produced by single individuals in four different countries over a
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five decade
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period
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from 1967 to 2007 after the analysis, it is clearly stated that the problem of carbon dioxide
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mostly found in
uk
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UK
almost
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quarter
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a quater
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quater
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quarter
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tonnes
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of tonnes
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in the year
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1967
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, it
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gradually after three years after which, the number fell significantly
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1987 to 2007
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, for
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Sweden
the
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produced stood at nearly 9
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tonnes
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in 1967
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it rose significantly almost 10
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after which its value fell drastically throughout the
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furthermore
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italy
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and
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showed the same pattern for carbon
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emission
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emissions
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however
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,
portugal
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started
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2.5
million
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tonnes
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while
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italy
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made double
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it in producing the
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of Co2 after that,
italy
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increased drastically to 6
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in 1977. a dip was seen between the
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after which the pattern showed
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an upward
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direction from 1987 to 2007
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portugal
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rose significantly too but in 1987 a small dip was seen after which it
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Sweden
swedan
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in producing
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emission
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emissions
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accounted
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for 5
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tonnes
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overall
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, it is vividly manifested that all four of them showed fluctuation throughout the
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but
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Sweden
swedan
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and
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the Uk
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Uk
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had control over the
emission
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over
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period
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the period
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the remaining countries showed upward
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direction
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, tonnes, emission, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person emissions
  • average emissions
  • gradual decrease
  • peak
  • sharp decline
  • steady increase
  • industrial growth
  • rise in emissions
  • economic development
  • industrialization
  • fossil fuels
  • downward trend
  • national responses
  • environmental policies
  • energy policies
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