You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear John,
I want to cordially invite you
on
the reception party Change preposition
to
of
my Change preposition
for
bother's
marriage anniversary.
As you know Correct your spelling
brother's
that
my brother Correct word choice
apply
is
Wrong verb form
has been
leaving
in Australia Verb problem
living
from
Change preposition
for
last
2 years with his wife. My brother Correct article usage
the last
have
come to live with us for Change the verb form
has
few
months and his anniversary falls on March, 20. I have decided to have a commemoration and make their day memorable forever.
Actually, rather than arranging Correct article usage
a few
party
at Add an article
a party
house
, the party is going to be held in Maharaja Add an article
the house
resort
, Capitalize word
Resort
Braptom
. I know you are coming from Correct your spelling
Brampton
far
location and it'll be hard to find the place. You should put the correct address on Correct article usage
a far
google maps
like Maharaja Resort, Brampton, A1B2C3.
I want you to stay with us that night because as soon as the guest leaves, we have another plan of having Correct your spelling
Google Maps
movie
night surprise at my house for everyone. If you Correct article usage
a movie
will
stay, I Verb problem
apply
would
be relentlessly glad Wrong verb form
will
anf
we will enjoyCorrect your spelling
and
a
lot more.
I hopeCorrect pronoun usage
ourselves a
,
we will meet soon.
AbcRemove the comma
apply
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure you maintain a logical flow of ideas throughout your letter. While your overall structure is good, there could be smoother transitions between your ideas to make the narrative more cohesive.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a single idea per paragraph, try to focus on one main idea in each paragraph and elaborate on it before moving to the next. It can help in making each section of your letter more focused and engaging.
Task Achievement
For task achievement, make sure to address all aspects of the prompt clearly. Your letter does a good job but could provide more detailed descriptions or explanations in some parts to fully satisfy the prompt's requirements.
Task Achievement
The tone of your letter is generally suitable for the context of inviting a friend to a party. However, watch for informal language that may not be appropriate in other types of letters. Adjusting your tone according to the type of letter you're writing is important.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,