With more and more people communicating via computers and mobile telephones. There is a real danger that we are losing ability to communicate with others face-to-face. To what extent you agree or disagree?

The phenomenon

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growing number of

people

communicating through computers and mobile phones is jeopardising their ability to directly interact with others. I convey my agreement over the statement, given the facts that irrespective

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convenience,

people

’s focus and sight power tend to decrease as they overuse those digital

media

and

this

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to disability to communicate in real life. Nowadays, the advancement of technology has been resulting

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more and more

people

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attached

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the

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of digital

media

. The underlying reason

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this

situation is the simplicity they obtain from using it.

For instance

,

people

now unnecessarily

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spend costs on visiting certain places just to

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up with some information they need to either acquire or deliver. In reverse, with internet accessibility, they are able to virtually meet and communicate with other

people

around the world.

Conversely

, physical healthiness is negatively affected during the

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of gadgets.

This

is proven by a study conducted by WHO in 2014,

resulting

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that at the same age,

people

with more mobile screen exposure, have less quality of sight. Ironically,

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is one of

indispensable

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component

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needed in communication between individuals in order to maintain the accurate information transferred; where

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without it, the accuracy of the intercourse will be more limited. Apart

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physical

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impact, digital

media

users are mentally impacted as well. Their mental focus, which refers to

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to concentrate on relevant information in

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environment, has

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to go down since

while

interacting virtually, there are plenty of distractions

such

as

notificiations

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notifications

and other technical issues that might appear on their screen. It

also

lead

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to the emanation of bad habits, to exemplify, impatience and impulsiveness.

To conclude

, considering the evidence of the using of digital

media

disadvantages

while

communicate

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rather than face to face,

hence

, I

correspond

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that communicating via computers and mobile phones

endanger

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people

’s direct communication ability.