The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares how many
shops
were shot down and opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there was an upward trend in old shops
moving out, and new shops
opened between 2012 to 2014, while
only in 2015, it got a distinct opposite,
To be specific, approximately 8,500 stores were opened, standing the striking highest initially
; however
, the volume reduced next year, being two times lower than the closed ones at around 4,000, which means that there were more old stores staying. Following that, the number of closed shops
witnessed a fluctuation, but there was a steady increase in opening shops
between 2012 to 2014, both of which approached each other in 2014 at 6,600 and 6,400, respectively.
On the other hand
, it was noticeable that this
country experienced the lowest number of shop closures in 2015. which was under 700. At the same time, the new shop's number kept going down to 3,000, being words apart from its beginning.Submitted by Chloe on
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