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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays the high and low temperatures every day in degree Celsius in two regions in Australia and the bar chart illustrates the percentage of rainy days monthly there.
Overall
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, it is evident that the weather in the earlier and later months in
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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 is quite hot.
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, the amount of rainfall in
Brisbane
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 is higher than in
Canberra
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 in several months, except from June to October. Regarding the daily temperatures, in the first six-month both areas kept falling significantly until July;
however
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, these two places witnessed a maximum temperature of 30 Celsius
degrees
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 and 27
degrees
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,
while
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 the minimum figures for
Brisbane
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 are only 10
degrees
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 and
Canberra
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 is just above 0
degrees
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. Over the second half of the year, the climate gets hotter as the average temperature increases noticeably.
Whereas
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Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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 reach a high of nearly 30 Celsius
degrees
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, the minima are 20
degrees
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 and 12
degrees
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, respectively. Turning to the average number of rainfall, in
Brisbane
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, February and March are recorded at the top of the list with 14 rainy days, followed by January, April as well December. Meanwhile, the period with rain during summer stands at only a week.
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, between June and October, the proportion in
Canberra
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 is the highest with over a week raining, compared to approximately 7 days in other months.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brisbane, canberra, degrees with synonyms.
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