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In many countries, truancy* is a worrying problem for both parents and educators. What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community? * truancy = the situation when a child pretends to go to school but in fact goes somewhere else, for example to play unsupervised. The verb is 'to play truant from school.'

#countries #truancy* #parents #educators #truancy #effects #child #community #situation #school #fact #verb
Parents
 and school teachers are complaining and worrying about those
of
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students who are leaving home in order to attend school but in
fact
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 they aim to somewhere else to conduct their wishes. There are potential causes for
this
 issue
as well as
 some drastic
long- term
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 effects. As people are concerned about their
children
's future, they continue to be
over protective
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 about them but, some do the opposite. Many
parents
 do not care about their
children
's school, behavior, friends
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ect
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etc.
 which directly leads to
children
's disobedience on the
one
 hand and
abusive
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on the other hand
.
For instance
, when
parents
 are not controlling them they will do whatever they wish, assuming nobody is aware. Indeed, education and family culture
as well as
 parent’s behavior significantly affect
children
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 future understanding and acts. When they play their role under desired and
non standard
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 how can
one
 blame
children
 for their
deed
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? Self-evidently, when
parents
 are not playing their correct role in
children
's
life
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 more unwanted, undesired consequences will
be emerged
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.
One
 huge problem will be that they will end up in jail as they continue to be disobedient and commit crimes in society from slight
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to severe.
For
instance
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children
 may start trading drugs as a source of fast and tremendous income.
Also
, they can stay illiterate and in the
future
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 they will be deprived of its benefits
therefore
 they cannot find suitable
job
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 for themselves. Working as
construction
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 worker may not be a good option but they have to take
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 to their lack of literacy.
Overall
, any negative result be will imagined as an effect of truancy that should be come under control. We infer that most of the abnormal
behaviors
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, crimes and conflicts from
grown up
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 people in society derive from actions
such
 as truancy that must be supervised effectively. If
this
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 issues are not properly taken care of in the long- term
this
 will exacerbate the situation and will be more costly if time
pass
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.
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Task Achievement
Ensure that your essay addresses all parts of the task. For this topic, you should explicitly discuss the causes of truancy as well as its effects on both the child and the wider community. Providing more specific and varied examples can help illustrate your points more effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion
Clarify your ideas and arguments by organizing them more logically. Use paragraphs effectively to separate different points, ensuring there's a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. This will help make your essay more cohesive and easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Support your main points with specific examples or evidence. While you've mentioned effects like potential imprisonment or illiteracy, delve deeper into how truancy directly contributes to these outcomes. More detailed examples can strengthen your arguments.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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