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The graph below gives invormation about percentage of pupulation in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives invormation about percentage of pupulation in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented line graph illustrates the ratio of
the
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urbanization in four various
countries
 in Asia during
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half of
century
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, starting in 1970 and the predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of individuals living in four Asian
countries
 namely, the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia increased over the given period and the prediction shows a gradual rise in the
population
 can be observed in 2030 and 2040. In detail, the urbanization of Indonesia was around 15% in 1970,
while
 Malaysia had a
population
 twice
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 in that year.
Moreover
, both
countries
 witnessed an increase over the following 50 years and reached 50% and 80% respectively.
Additionally
, in 1970, almost 32 per cent of the whole
population
 lived in the cities of the Philippines,
whereas
this
 number went up to around 50% in 1990, and
then
 despite suffering a slight decline over the following 20 years,
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maintained a steady growth since that reached at about 45% in 2020.
Furthermore
, Thailand experienced a rise in the first two decades and reached
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30% in 1990, and
then
 the portion of the urban citizens steadily
remaind
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remained
remain
remains
 the same.
Finally
, the projections demonstrate that the
population
 of cities in all four mentioned
countries
 will go up in the following 2 decades and
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reach
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around 80% for Malaysia and the percentages between 50% to 60% for the other three
countries
 will be achieved.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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