The graph below gives invormation about percentage of pupulation in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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urbanization in four various

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in Asia during

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half of

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, starting in 1970 and the predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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, it can be seen that the number of individuals living in four Asian

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namely, the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia increased over the given period and the prediction shows a gradual rise in the

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can be observed in 2030 and 2040. In detail, the urbanization of Indonesia was around 15% in 1970,

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Malaysia had a

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twice

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in that year.

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, both

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witnessed an increase over the following 50 years and reached 50% and 80% respectively.

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, in 1970, almost 32 per cent of the whole

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lived in the cities of the Philippines,

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number went up to around 50% in 1990, and

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despite suffering a slight decline over the following 20 years,

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maintained a steady growth since that reached at about 45% in 2020.

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, Thailand experienced a rise in the first two decades and reached

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30% in 1990, and

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the portion of the urban citizens steadily

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, the projections demonstrate that the

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of cities in all four mentioned

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will go up in the following 2 decades and

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around 80% for Malaysia and the percentages between 50% to 60% for the other three

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will be achieved.