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You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no - one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company in your letter. Say why you are writing and how you feel. Explain what happened Tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I
who
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recently took a trip with your taxi company. My name is Asilbek. I am writing
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 letter with the complaint of solving
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 issue. I was going to
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America
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 is
very
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a very
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 long distance for me.
I and
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taxi
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the taxi
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 driver had arrived in
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New York
city
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 and continued to move to
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America. We face the problem at that moment. In fact, we were moving
slow
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, especially
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 was
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an
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insufferable form for me.
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, I felt
tiring
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 and
pains
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at
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in
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the
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my body part. I complained to the company. But nobody replied
me
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to me
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.
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, it was not very good service for
passenger
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. I suggest that you should improve your service. In the
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 of my sentence, I need to remark above position again and I suppose that you can take a complaint after that, it will be resolved soon. Yours faithfully, Asilbek

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Task Achievement
Begin by clearly stating your reason for writing at the start of your letter. Instead of ambiguously mentioning 'solving this issue,' specify that you are lodging a formal complaint about a recent unpleasant taxi ride.
Task Achievement
To achieve a complete response, make sure to address all three points in the task: your feelings, a detailed account of the incident, and the specific actions you expect from the company. Your letter touches on these but could provide more specific details, especially regarding the nature of the driver's behavior and your exact expectations.
Coherence & Cohesion
Improve coherence by structuring your letter into clear paragraphs, each covering a separate point: your feelings, the incident, and your expected resolution. This will enhance the logical flow and comprehension of your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use transition words and phrases ('However,' 'Therefore,' 'Moreover') to connect your ideas more clearly and make your argumentation stronger.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a better greeting and closing, maintain a polite and formal tone throughout. Your closing 'Yours faithfully' is appropriate, but ensure the body of your letter also maintains this level of formality and respect.
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