You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no - one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company in your letter. Say why you are writing and how you feel. Explain what happened Tell them what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I insufferable form for me.
who
recently took a trip with your taxi company. My name is Asilbek. I am writing Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
letter with the complaint of solving this
issue.
I was going to the
AmericaCorrect article usage
apply
where
is Correct word choice
which
very
long distance for me. Correct article usage
a very
I and
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And
taxi
driver had arrived in Add an article
the taxi
the
New York Correct article usage
apply
city
and continued to move to Capitalize word
City
the
America. We face the problem at that moment. In fact, we were moving Correct article usage
apply
slow
, especially Change the word
slowly
it
wasCorrect word choice
since it
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an
the
As a result
, I felt tiring
and Replace the word
tired
pains
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pain
at
Change preposition
in
the
my body part. I complained to the company. But nobody replied Remove the article
apply
me
. Change preposition
to me
Moreover
, it was not very good service for passenger
. I suggest that you should improve your service.
In the Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
last
of my sentence, I need to remark above position again and I suppose that you can take a complaint after that, it will be resolved soon.
Yours faithfully,
AsilbekSubmitted by soglomovsarvar on
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Task Achievement
Begin by clearly stating your reason for writing at the start of your letter. Instead of ambiguously mentioning 'solving this issue,' specify that you are lodging a formal complaint about a recent unpleasant taxi ride.
Task Achievement
To achieve a complete response, make sure to address all three points in the task: your feelings, a detailed account of the incident, and the specific actions you expect from the company. Your letter touches on these but could provide more specific details, especially regarding the nature of the driver's behavior and your exact expectations.
Coherence & Cohesion
Improve coherence by structuring your letter into clear paragraphs, each covering a separate point: your feelings, the incident, and your expected resolution. This will enhance the logical flow and comprehension of your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use transition words and phrases ('However,' 'Therefore,' 'Moreover') to connect your ideas more clearly and make your argumentation stronger.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a better greeting and closing, maintain a polite and formal tone throughout. Your closing 'Yours faithfully' is appropriate, but ensure the body of your letter also maintains this level of formality and respect.