The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
people
in
cities
of the
Philippines
,
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020 with future predictions including 2030 and 2040 respectively.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
population
of all four Asian countries increased significantly and
Malaysia
stood out having the highest proportion of the
population
.
This
pattern will likely continue into the future. In 1970,
Malaysia
and the
Philippines
had the highest percentage of the
population
living in
cities
, constituting approximately 30% and 31% respectively.
However
, it is predicted that by 2030, the proportion of city dwellers in
Malaysia
will be around 78%, which is expected to increase slightly in the next 10 years, making approx. 80% of
population
.
Furthermore
, in 1990, the volume of
Philippines
living in
cities
was around 45% which decreased
further
in the next 20 years, after 2010, the figure increased slightly, and it is expected that around 50% of
people
will reside in the
Philippines
cities
by 2040.
However
, in 1970, Thailand and Indonesia city residents had the lowest percentage of the
population
, constituting approximately 14% and 18% respectively.
According to
future predictions, Indonesia will become the second highest populated country, around 55% of
people
will be residing in
cities
by 2040,
while
Thailand
also
experience a notable surge and is predicted to have 39% of
people
living in
cities
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, cities, philippines, malaysia, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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