The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the
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consumption in three different sectors, in
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Diego
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County
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,
California
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, and the world as a whole.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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agriculture is responsible for the largest percentage of
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usage worldwide,
while
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in both
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and
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Diego
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County
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, homes account for an immense amount of
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consumption. Regarding the residential sector, it takes roughly two-thirds of the
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usage in
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Diego
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County
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and about two-fifths in
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Diego
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County
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.
In contrast
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, only 8% of
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consumption worldwide goes to homes.
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, almost the same amount of
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is used in the industry, with 23% in both
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Diego
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County
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and worldwide, making it 10% less than
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. Looking at the agriculture sector, it is responsible for just over two-thirds of the global
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use.
However
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, a significantly lower amount is used in
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and
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Diego
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County
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, with 28% and 17%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, san, diego, county, california with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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