your friend wants to send his or her children to yours school for the weekeneds. Write a letter to him or her to say 1. agree to the arrangement 2. say what time is suitable 3. describe what you are planning.
Dear Aman,
Hi !
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like.
.
I hope Change the punctuation
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this
letter finds you in a
radiant health and best spirits.It is great to hear that you are going to send Ammy and Rose to my home on Remove the article
apply
weekwends
. Correct your spelling
weekends
This
woud
be Correct your spelling
would
joyful
time for me.I would love to have them at my house.I am totally free from my work for Add an article
a joyful
this
upcoming weekend.
As you know that
there are some house chores which Correct word choice
apply
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I
usally
do on Correct your spelling
usually
saturday
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Saturday
due to
my hectic week days
. I hope Correct your spelling
weekdays
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will finish Change the capitalization
I
such
tasks before 12pm on saturday
.Change the capitalization
Saturday
Therefore
, you feel free to drop them any time after 12pm.
Moreover
, i
have made a plan for them to enjoy my company. I will cook cookies for them as a lunch on Change the capitalization
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saturday
. After Change the capitalization
Saturday
lunch
we will visit a park near to my home which has many swings for kids .Add a comma
lunch,
Then
, dinner will be cooked by Mom at her house. However
, we will visit zoo
on Add an article
the zoo
sunday
morning. I haveChange the capitalization
Sunday
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apply
lready
booked tickets for Correct your spelling
already
ready
Zoo
. In Correct article usage
the Zoo
evening
, we would go Add an article
the evening
for dining
out Change preposition
to dine
to
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at
Taj
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the Taj
hotel
. I hope your kid will enjoy my company.
Hoping to see them soon!
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lovlely
,
ParmCorrect your spelling
lovely
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Greeting and Closing
Ensure the letter has a clear and formal opening and closing. Using terms like 'Hi! What is cooking and looking.' may feel too casual for a letter between adults, even if they are friends. Consider beginning with 'Dear [name],' and a more traditional greeting such as 'I hope this letter finds you well.'
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain consistency in the tone of the letter. While it's informal and friendly, certain expressions or phrases might seem too casual or out of place. Aim for a balance between warmth and appropriate formality.
Logical Structure and Single Idea per Paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. The letter generally adheres to this structure but refining and focusing each paragraph on its main point will strengthen coherence. For example, dedicate individual paragraphs solely to the timing of the visit, the plan for the weekend, and concluding thoughts or next steps.
Complete Response
The task has been understood and responded to appropriately, with all components addressed: agreement to the arrangement, suitable time, and a description of plans. To further improve, make the plans slightly more detailed or personalized to demonstrate deeper consideration for the children's visit.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,