You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match
Dear Daniel,
I hope you
in
a good mood. To tell the truth, I am writing about Add a missing verb
are in
our
game that we played yesterday. Our team's members played so well in the rivalry. But we did not win. The main reason for Change the word
the
this
enemy team is more experienced than us. If you took part in competition
, we probably would win.
Add an article
a competition
the competition
In
that day, Change preposition
On
weather
is Correct article usage
the weather
cloudly
and windy which I hate. Correct your spelling
cloudy
However
, it did not influence to
my mood. Again, the most painful thing is that my worst person played in our team Change preposition
apply
instead
of you. He always got on my nerves.
But, he is too unworthy to I dissapointed
. I actually keep some bad people off on my own. Correct your spelling
disappointed
Although
it is so, we played each other with cooperation. Get well soon. If you have time tomorrow, will you give me a call?
Love
George.Submitted by soglomovsarvar on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Begin with a more empathetic greeting, and clearly separate ideas into paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Focus on a more consistent and positive tone throughout your letter to reflect compassion and team spirit, especially in a letter to a friend recovering from an accident.
Overall Writing
Check your letter for grammatical errors and ensure you use the correct tense. Consider using more varied sentence structures to make your letter more interesting.
Task Achievement
Make sure to fully address all parts of the task. Include more details on the match, how the team felt without the injured member, and perhaps offer encouragement or a plan for the injured member's return.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,