This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the
process
by which plastic
bottles
are recycled. Overall
, the process
consists of nine steps in recycling, starting with collecting bottles
from household bins or trash and ending with producing new products.
At the beginning of the process
, the plastic
bottles
are collected from each bin, and they are delivered to the recycling centre for sorting to see which type is renewable. After that, all bottles
are compressed into blocks, and then
they are sent into the crushing process
. Crushed plastic
is soaked in water for washing to remove toxins or dirty substances from the plastic
.
In the next stage of the process
, the cleaned plastic
is transferred to the producing plastic
pellet stage. After that, plastic
pellets are heated to form raw materials. In the last
stage of the process
, it is collected on the wooden tray to prepare for producing end products such
as new bottles
, T-shirts, pencils, or recycled bags.Submitted by krist_ar03 on
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