The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.
The line chart illustrates the changes in the
number
of people who travelled to a particular Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017. Overall
, the total of travellers, including those staying on cruise ships and staying on the island
, increased from 1 million
to 3.5 million
in this
period. Moreover
, it had shown
a sharp growth Wrong verb form
showed
during
2016 to 2017.
First of all, there were merely 0.25 Change preposition
from
million
visitors staying on ships in 2010. Subsequently
, this
number
fluctuated in the next two years and then
rose dramatically by 1.75 million
in the following periods. Notably, it has exceeded the number
of visitors staying on the island
since 2016.
In addition
, the figure of how many people stayed on the island
to visit the Caribbean island
started to grow in 2011 and plateaued at 1.5 million
from 2013 to 2015. This
number
declined to approximately 1.25 million
in 2016 while
it ultimately recovered to 1.5 million
in 2017.Submitted by J.C.Li.1997.11 on
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