You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer .Writer a letter to the photographer .In your letter : •Say that you liked their photos of your family •Ask them to be your photographer at special family event •Give them the details of the event
Dear Sir
I want to thank you for the pictures you took very
last
week for
me and my family.I must say that each picture is
different and each person is depicted Change preposition
of
differetly
in the picture .
My family and ICorrect your spelling
differently
Add a missing verb
were
surpresed
to see these pictures.Correct your spelling
surprised
You
talent is undeniable.
I really liked your work.So, I want to give, you a suggestion. My family and I planning Change the pronoun
Your
special
event soon .We can only, trust you with Add an article
a special
event
.Add an article
the event
an event
Obviously
your ability Add a comma
Obviously,
capture
special moments is amazing.We are sure that the memories we make at the event will Fix the infinitive
to capture
last
be cherished throughout the year.
We are planning to celebrate my mom's brithday
on 11 Correct your spelling
birthday
january
at Change the capitalization
January
19:00
"Bek" Correct article usage
the 19,00
restourant
.My mom wants to have lots of pictures on her Correct your spelling
restaurant
brithday
.I hope you can do it.
Thank you for your work I look forward Correct your spelling
birthday
possibillty
of working together again .If you are Correct your spelling
possibility
avialable
I would love to discuss Correct your spelling
available
further
details.Please feel Correct your spelling
free
fee
to contact me Correct your spelling
free
Telegram
Yours sincerely
AsalChange preposition
via Telegram
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Spelling and Grammar
Be sure to proofread your letter to correct any spelling or grammatical errors such as 'surpresed' instead of 'surprised,' 'restourant' instead of 'restaurant,' and 'brithday' instead of 'birthday.' Accuracy in spelling is important for maintaining professionalism.
Punctuation and Clarity
Try to maintain consistency in punctuation, especially with commas and periods. There are some run-on sentences that could be broken down for clarity, such as 'You talent is undeniable. I really liked your work.' These could be separated more effectively.
Paragraph Structure
For better coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. The first paragraph could focus solely on expressing gratitude and admiration for the photos. The second could introduce the idea of hiring for a future event, and the third could provide event details.
Tone and Formality
It would enhance your letter's professionalism to include a more formal closing line and your full name. For privacy and security, consider suggesting more formal and secure methods of communication than Telegram for business purposes.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.