Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree! Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expenence. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, people are swayed to buy products because of the powerful advertisement that companies

uses

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, despite not needing these products. I agree

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this

notion as there are a lot of businesses

utilise

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social media

influencers

to promote almost anything,

as well as

confusing

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consumers with graphics online to make them visit websites.

Firstly

, one of the trendiest ways to introduce products to the market is by sending them to

influencers

, for them to showcase the new features on their platforms in a creative way.

For example

, Dyson,

producer

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of many advanced technologies

such

as vacuums and hair dryers

send

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out their newest Hair Iron to selected

tiktok

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TikTok

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influencers

to try out the new product. People who

follows

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follow

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those

influencers

will

then

get swayed and buy the new Iron, even though they do not need it.

Furthermore

, they save more money from paying

advertisement

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for advertisement

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models. Another reason why I agree is some promotions online often shows misleading prices to engage consumers to visit their websites,

such

as using different prices on different item photo.

As a result

, buyers do not realise that they

brought

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bought

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more than what they actually need in that shop.

This

is common with monthly sales on e-commerce, which is an effective strategy they use to keep customers

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forward

for

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big sales every month. In conclusion, many individuals are influenced by social media content

creators

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creators'

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promotion because of their creative way of showcasing items, and despite

falsely

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being falsely

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advertised, they buy items they do not necessarily need. In my opinion, indeed

that

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apply

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these big earning companies are mostly acquiring their profit from these

type

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types

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of advertisements.