Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree! Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expenence. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, people are swayed to buy products because of the powerful advertisement that companies
uses
, despite not needing these products. I agree Change the verb form
use
to
Change preposition
with
this
notion as there are a lot of businesses utilise
social media Correct pronoun usage
that utilise
influencers
to promote almost anything, as well as
confusing
consumers with graphics online to make them visit websites.
Wrong verb form
confuse
Firstly
, one of the trendiest ways to introduce products to the market is by sending them to influencers
, for them to showcase the new features on their platforms in a creative way. For example
, Dyson, producer
of many advanced technologies Correct article usage
a producer
such
as vacuums and hair dryers send
out their newest Hair Iron to selected Correct subject-verb agreement
sends
tiktok
Correct your spelling
TikTok
influencers
to try out the new product. People who follows
those Change the verb form
follow
influencers
will then
get swayed and buy the new Iron, even though they do not need it. Furthermore
, they save more money from paying advertisement
models.
Another reason why I agree is some promotions online often shows misleading prices to engage consumers to visit their websites, Change preposition
for advertisement
such
as using different prices on different item photo. As a result
, buyers do not realise that they brought
more than what they actually need in that shop. Correct your spelling
bought
This
is common with monthly sales on e-commerce, which is an effective strategy they use to keep customers look
forward Wrong verb form
looking
for
big sales every month.
In conclusion, many individuals are influenced by social media content Change preposition
to
creators
promotion because of their creative way of showcasing items, and despite Change noun form
creators'
creator's
falsely
advertised, they buy items they do not necessarily need. In my opinion, indeed Add a missing verb
being falsely
that
these big earning companies are mostly acquiring their profit from these Correct word choice
apply
type
of advertisements.Fix the agreement mistake
types
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