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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 line chart illustrates the situations of four Asian countries’ proportions of urban residents between 1970 and 2020,a prediction for the following two decades is
also
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 given. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective,it can be seen that the urban populations of all Asian countries remained at
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a steady
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 increase and Malaysia has been in first place in most cases.
In contrast
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,the
Philippines
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’ data fell with fluctuation during the two decades(1990-2010). From 1970 to 2020,it is apparent that Malaysia and
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 had more people living in the cities accounting for 30% and 32% respectively,
while
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 Thailand and Indonesia had relatively lower proportions of 18% and 15% respectively.There was a common increase in these four countries in the following 50 years except
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.A decade after 1980,the percentage of the
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’ civic population soared by almost 20% and reached its peak of 50% in 1990 but plunged by nearly 10% in the later 20 years.In comparison,Indonesia,which was underlaid in 1970,had a continuous rise and caught up with
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 in 2010,it took
place
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 of
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 and ranked second afterwards. In terms of the prediction of these countries’ future changes,they might remain steadily increasing and their ranking probably won’t change,Malaysia is predicted to reach a peak of 80% in 2040,which would be much higher than the other three countries.What’s more,
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 is forecasted to keep climbing after 2010,ending its long-term decline for 20 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban population
  • Trend analysis
  • Urbanization rate
  • Economic development
  • Rural-urban migration
  • Infrastructure
  • Socio-economic events
  • Stagnation
  • Anomalies
  • Environmental concerns
  • Predictive analysis
  • Geographical aspects
  • Government policies
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