The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of tourists to the Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017,including two groups of visitors
who chose to travel by cruise ships or stay on the island
as well as
their total amount.
Looking from an overall
perspective,it is apparent that there was an increase of two kinds of visitors
during the period(2010-2017),and the whole group has steadily grown except for a temporary stay in 2015.Generally speaking,there were more people who preferred ship tours instead
of staying on the island
before 2015,but after that,the situation has changed.
In terms of cruise ships travelling,its data was 1 million
higher than the other one that a quarter of a million
visitors
wanted to stay on cruise ships, while
another 750000 visitors
were staying on the island
.It remained unchanged until 2011,then
it climbed up by 1.5 million
in the following two years
and reached its peak in 2013.Nevertheless
,it stabilised at 1.5 million
in the following 4 years
except for a short fall
of 250000 Correct your spelling
shortfall
of
people with fluctuation in 2016.
As for people who want to spend their holidays on the Change preposition
apply
island
,the population slightly increased by half of a million
in 2010 but immediately declined and rose to 500000 at its zenith.In the years
since 2012,the number of them increased dramatically,growing from 0.5 million
to 2 million
,reaching its peak in 2017.It was worth mentioning that their data exceeded the other group of tourists,who had been beyond them for 5 years
before.Submitted by 1320493878 on
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