The bar chart below shows how frequently people in USA are in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The bar chart below shows how frequently people in USA are in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart compares the frequency that Americans going to fast
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restaurants
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in 2003, 2006 and 201 by showing the percentages of people.
Overall
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, the vast majority of consumers in the USA went to fast
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restaurants
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once a week in 2003 and 2006
while
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the frequency reduced to once or twice a month in 2013.
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the information shown in the diagram, over 30% of customers in the USA were in fast
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restaurants
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once a week in 2003 and 2006.
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, there were only around 28% of them went to fast
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restaurants
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in 2013 and most of them were in
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kind of restaurant once or twice a month which was around 5% higher.
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, less than 5% of people in the USA went to fast
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restaurants
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every day at the given time which was even lower than the percentage of Americans who never went to a fast
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restaurant.
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