You have just spent a holiday with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Reza,
I hope you are doing well. The holiday we spent together was fascinating. I hope we can spend more time with each other again.
Anyway, when I got home
last
night, I realized that I have
left my wallet at your villa.
I would like to thank you deeply for your hospitality and whatever you did for both of us to have a memorable day. Yesterday was one of the best Wrong verb form
had
time
I have ever experienced with you. Fix the agreement mistake
times
Furthermore
, your villa was really beautiful and cozy
and I really love it. Change the spelling
cosy
Moreover
, the food and dessert was so delicious and indescribable.
When we decided to get back, I started to pack my stuff and I was in rush
. I put everything in my backpack and my wallet was on the shelf. So, I forgot to put it in my pocket Correct article usage
a rush
therefore
, it has been left on the self
in my room.
I would really appreciate it if you bring my wallet with Correct your spelling
shelf
yourself
anytime you go back to your villa and post it back to me. I will pay all the costs and you need to pay nothing.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
KhashayarCorrect pronoun usage
you
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea, but also consider providing more connecting sentences or transitions to link the paragraphs further and enhance the overall flow of the letter. This will improve the cohesion and make it easier for the reader to follow.
Task Achievement
Ensure that you address all parts of the task fully. In this case, more specific instructions on how the wallet could be sent or any particular details that need to be included in the shipment might enhance the task response.
Writing Tone
The informal writing style suits the context of writing to a friend, but you could further improve the tone by including more personal remarks or shared memories to enhance the personal touch of the letter, making the appreciation for the holiday and the request feel more heartfelt.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.