The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented graph indicates some data about figures of closed
shops
and recent
shops
in a country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that there has been a slight decrease in closed
shops
in these years.
While
the amount of opened
shops
has ‌drastically dropped in
this
period. Considering the first 4 years, the closed
shops
have been stabled.
Whereas
new
shops
have been experienced it`s most fluctuation. Between 2014 and 2016, the least amount of closed
shops
is remarkable.
This
means owners are not volunteered to give up their career ladder. For opened
shops
, numbers have been slowly dropped from 6,000 to 4,000.
Finally
, for the rest of the years, opened
shops
experienced the same trend and closed
shops
have stayed at 5,000. In conclusion, by reviewing both of these trends, it seems that most of the businessmen and businesswomen are departing from their occupation.
Moreover
, people in 2011 were not as interested in starting a new career rather than individuals in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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