The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projecyions for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projecyions for 2050.
The four pie charts illustrate the proportion of the ages of the
population
in two countries namely Yemen
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and
Itlay
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Italy
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in two different periods 2000 and 2050.
An
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overall
perspective, the Yeman has the lower number of senior citizens in both these given
period
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.
In contrast
, Italy has
minimum
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a minimum
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population
in
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of
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elder people. Yamen had
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just above half of the
population
which
age
is from 0 to 14
while
Itlay had only 14.3 per
cent
in 2000.
This
proportion will be decreased by 37% and 11.5% respectively in 2050.
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age
group
of 15-59, in 2000
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Yemen had 46.3
percentage
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whereas
it will increase by 11% in 2050.
On the contrary
, in 2000, Italy had
this
same
ave
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age
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group
of
population
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the population
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, which accounts for just above three-fifths
then
this
age
group
will be decreased in 2050,
at
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11.3 per
cent
. The
age
group
of above sixty in Yamen, in 2000, just 3 per
cent
but Italy had just below a quarter
thereafter
this
age
group
of people ratio will be raised significantly in 2050. Which accounts for 5.7% and 42.3 per
cent
respectively.
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