You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: • describe the vacation spot you have chosen • explain how you plan to spend your time there • invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

Dear John The reason why
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some exciting news with you. I have decided to take
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to the beautiful city of
Bukhara
in Uzbekistan.
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is known for its oldest buildings
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and vibrant culture, and
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am thrilled to have the opportunity to explore
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plan to spend my days visiting historical places and learning about the local traditions and rich history.I
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delicious Uzbekistan cuisine. As I was planning my
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Bukhara
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of us. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! Your sincere Akbarshoh
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structure
Ensure that your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. In your introduction, directly mention your intention to invite your friend for a vacation. The body should detail the vacation spot, how you plan to spend your time, and the invitation. Conclude with anticipation of a response or future interaction.
paragraph organization
Use paragraphs effectively to organize your ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, such as introducing the vacation spot, detailing your plans, and extending the invitation. This enhances readability and coherence.
grammar and punctuation
Pay attention to punctuation and grammar. While your letter is overall well-written, minor errors can distract the reader. Carefully proofread to correct any mistakes, ensuring clear and professional communication.
specificity in invitation
Be more specific in your invitation. Instead of a general invitation, suggest specific dates or plans for when you wish your friend to join you. This makes the invitation seem more concrete and actionable.
emotional engagement
Enhance your letter by adding personal touches or expressing emotions. Share why you think your friend would enjoy the trip or recall past experiences you've shared. This personal touch can make your invitation more compelling.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking scenery
  • cultural landmarks
  • itinerary
  • accommodations
  • excursions
  • gastronomic delights
  • leisure activities
  • unwind and relax
  • off the beaten track
  • once-in-a-lifetime experience
  • picturesque
  • explore
  • local cuisine
  • adventure
  • bonding
  • create memories
  • companionship
  • escapade
  • serenity
  • revitalize
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