Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: •Your reason for writing •What you would like to happen •A nice, respectful style.

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your small
dog
that barks throughout the day
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and
the night. I do not deflect to feed a
dog
.
However
your
dog
barks without cease. I do not concentrate my mind when I want to do my studies. I am not at all pleased that I do not sleep very well. Meanwhile, my nervous system can not take it anymore.
In addition
to
this
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I invited my
familiy
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family
members to my flat.
However
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they were annoyed
of
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by
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your
dog
's behaviour. I want to invite you
a
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good idea. I have read
advertisement
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an advertisement
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of
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in
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the "Animal
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" magazine. Maybe you give your
dog
to a
dog
's home. It should be around dogs like it. It is uncomfortable in
flat
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. To resolve the problem. I would appreciate it if you could. If you
agre
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agree
with my idea, please call me. I look forward
hearing
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from you! Yours faithfully Sabin
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task response
Focus on creating a clear introduction to your letter that directly addresses the purpose of your writing. Avoid indirect statements that might confuse the reader about your intentions.
task response
Consider offering more constructive solutions to the problem, such as suggesting ways to train the dog not to bark or discussing potential compromises, rather than immediately suggesting to give the dog away.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter would benefit from a more structured approach. Consider organizing your letter into paragraphs, each addressing a specific point: 1) introduction and reason for writing, 2) how the issue affects you, 3) proposed solutions, and 4) a polite closing statement.
coherence and cohesion
Avoid abrupt endings to your letter. A more thoughtful conclusion, reiterating your main points and expressing a desire for a peaceful resolution, will make your letter more effective and respectful.
suitable writing tone
Consider your tone throughout the letter. While it's important to convey the seriousness of the issue, ensure your language remains respectful and constructive, aiming to foster understanding and cooperation.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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