The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.

The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.
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The chart above shows data on three states in the United States:
California
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,
Utah
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, and
Florida
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. The chart displays information about age distribution, average
income
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per person, and
poverty
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rates. In terms of age distribution,
Utah
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has the highest percentage of young people, with 28% of its
population
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under 18.
Florida
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,
on the other hand
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, has the highest percentage of people over the age of 60, with 23% of the
population
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falling into
this
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category. When compared to
Utah
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,
Florida
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has almost three times as many people over 60.
California
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falls in the middle, with intermediate percentages of both young and old populations. In terms of average
income
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per person,
California
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has the highest value, with an average of $23,000.
Florida
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follows closely behind, with an average
income
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of $22,000,
while
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Utah
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has the lowest average
income
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at $17,000. The difference between
California
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and
Florida
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is only $1,000.
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, despite having a high average
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,
California
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has the highest rate of
poverty
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, with 16% of its
population
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falling below the
poverty
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line.
In contrast
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,
Utah
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, despite having a lower average
income
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, has a better
poverty
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rate, with only 9% of its
population
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living below the
poverty
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line, compared to 12% in both
California
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and
Florida
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words california, utah, florida, income, poverty, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • disparities
  • correlate
  • socio-economic factors
  • demographic
  • economic prosperity
  • variance
  • indicators
  • social welfare programs
  • economic development
  • policy-making
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