some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A considerable number of

people

think that animals and

plants

threatened by extinction

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our prominent environmental issue,

while

others advocate that we have more crucial environmental issues. Based on my knowledge, both statements

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to some

extents

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.

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essay will discuss both distinct perspectives. On the one hand, from the pre-historical times, the diversity of creatures

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contributed utilities to men. Both

animals

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and

plants

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species have their own benefits to

evolving

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process.

Therefore

, it is undeniable that

people

have always been interacting with nature. To delve into, the rare animal and plant species utilize either

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medicine sector or just only a captivating view of nature.

For instance

, in the

health-care

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industry, there are a great number of

plants

that

used

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as a compound of medicines or creams that

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a lot

for

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people

.

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, even taking

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fresh air in a serene atmosphere could be done by means of those

plants

. Their benefits to offer us not

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solely by

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tangible reasons but

also

there are abstract reasons

such

as

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of belonging to nature which give us.

On the other hand

, there are urgent problems that should be tackled immediately. Thereby, some

people

partial

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to those kinds of issues rather than extinction prospects. With

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industrialism, the

possibilty

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possibility

of

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resource scarcity in either food or water

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emerged as a major problem. Because of that case, many

people

pay attention to these possibilities and consider others regardless.

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, in 2024, there

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been any rain in some regions that it used to do. To these

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agree with

second

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statement that points out the crucial problems.

To conclude

,

although

having a

diversity

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environment

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its own charm and benefits to

people

, there are major issues that need

ammendments

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amendments

that

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by the governments.