some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A considerable number of
people
think that animals and plants
threatened by extinction is
our prominent environmental issue, Change the verb form
are
while
others advocate that we have more crucial environmental issues. Based on my knowledge, both statements justifiable
to some Add a missing verb
are justifiable
extents
. Fix the agreement mistake
extent
This
essay will discuss both distinct perspectives.
On the one hand, from the pre-historical times, the diversity of creatures have
contributed utilities to men. Both Correct subject-verb agreement
has
animals
and Fix the agreement mistake
animal
plants
species have their own benefits to Change the noun form
plant
evolving
process. Add an article
the evolving
Therefore
, it is undeniable that people
have always been interacting with nature. To delve into, the rare animal and plant species utilize either enhanced
medicine sector or just only a captivating view of nature. Correct article usage
the enhanced
For instance
, in the health-care
industry, there are a great number of Correct your spelling
healthcare
plants
that used
as a compound of medicines or creams that Add a missing verb
are used
meant
a lot Wrong verb form
mean
for
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to
people
. Moreover
, even taking a
fresh air in a serene atmosphere could be done by means of those Remove the article
apply
plants
. Their benefits to offer us not restrict
solely by Wrong verb form
restricted
the
tangible reasons but Correct article usage
apply
also
there are abstract reasons such
as sense
of belonging to nature which give us.
Correct article usage
a sense
On the other hand
, there are urgent problems that should be tackled immediately. Thereby, some people
partial
to those kinds of issues rather than extinction prospects. With Add a missing verb
are partial
the
industrialism, the Correct article usage
apply
possibilty
of Correct your spelling
possibility
the
resource scarcity in either food or water Correct article usage
apply
have
emerged as a major problem. Because of that case, many Change the verb form
has
people
pay attention to these possibilities and consider others regardless. For instance
, in 2024, there haven’t
been any rain in some regions that it used to do. To these Change the verb form
hasn’t
extents
Add a comma
extents,
i
agree with Change the capitalization
I
second
statement that points out the crucial problems.
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the second
To conclude
, although
having a diversity
environment Replace the word
diverse
have
its own charm and benefits to Correct subject-verb agreement
has
people
, there are major issues that need ammendments
that Correct your spelling
amendments
implement
by the governments.Wrong verb form
are implemented
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