The chart below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European countries from 2000 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the percentage of
women
in Parliament
in the countries of Germany, Italy, France, The United Kingdom, and Belgium in 12 years from 2000 and continuing until 2012.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the amount of female parliament
was much less in the UK and Belgium compared to the other three European countries in the first year, however
, this
number rose in the following years.
With regard to the comparison between the five countries below, only 5% of British women
were interested in this
field in 2000, while
Germans were in first place in this
field with almost 35%. As moving on, however
, the percentage in the UK experienced a sharp growth and reached on fifth of the total number. Belgian women
, moreover
, started at 17% and rose steadily in this
period eventually reaching quite more than 20%. France in third place, started with a quarter of all the women
who participated in parliament
and continued its growth by more than 30% in 2012, compared to Italian females who started with the same percentage, but reached the maximum of 40%. Finally
, Germans started off strong by the amount of 34%, and had a slight growth to 37%.
In conclusion, the amount of parliament
women
was the lowest in the UK and highest in Germany in the first year, however
, as the plot unfolded, the Italians stepped on the highest level with 40% in 2012.Submitted by vaniaa.z.h2005 on
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