The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a certain country that had Internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Household Internet Access 60% "'1'1'""-;::==============::::;----------2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016 Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a certain country that had Internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Household Internet Access 60% "'1'1'""-;::==============::::;----------2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016 Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates how many urban/suburban and rural
household
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households
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have access to the
internet
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Internet
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from 1999 to 2004 in a certain country.
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, it is clearly seen
than
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that
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urban are more accessible in terms of
internet
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the internet
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.
On the other hand
, Rural areas have
also
shown
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a significan
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significan
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significant
rise in
the
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internet
accessibility
while
metropolitan cities have experienced
gradual
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a gradual
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rise in the same aspect. From 1999 to 2000,
urban
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the urban
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area was almost doubled from 15% to 30% with
internet
accessibility. After 2000, every year there was
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an addition
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of 10%
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of household
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household
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households
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having
internet
in urban areas till 2002. Urban
area
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areas
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with
internet
increased only about 5% from 2002 to 2004. In 1999, around 2%
rural
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of rural
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areas
have
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internet
. Which gradually rose
with
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5% every year till 2002
with
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at
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15%. In 2003 there was
significant
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growth
around
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25%
in
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2003, which is almost half of the urban
household
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households
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with
internet
accessibility. with 35% in 2004, it reached
to
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its highest number.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • urban/suburban households
  • rural households
  • Internet access
  • 2011
  • 2016
  • increase
  • significantly lower
  • trend
  • gap
  • narrowed
  • advancements
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • reduced costs
  • government
  • private sector
  • initiatives
  • improve
  • infrastructure
  • contributed
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