Companies that use fossil fuels should be taxed more than companies that use green energies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that companies that are not using renewable
energy
should pay more Use synonyms
taxes
than their counterpart. Use synonyms
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essay completely agrees with Linking Words
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statement because Linking Words
this
can encourage them to transition into using alternative Linking Words
energy
and the revenue from these Use synonyms
taxes
can be used in dealing with issues in the environment.
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To begin
with, incurring higher Linking Words
taxes
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a company that uses natural gases, oil, and coal can prompt them to transition to using renewable Change preposition
for
energy
. Use synonyms
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measure can be detrimental to the company. If they will have to pay a significant amount of tax, their profit will decrease, which can lead to closure. In order to prevent Linking Words
this
, they can shift to cleaner sources Linking Words
instead
. Linking Words
For instance
, they can invest in solar power. Linking Words
This
can help them generate more income because they will no longer have to pay for electricity. Linking Words
Thus
, implementing Linking Words
this
rule can lead them to utilize renewable energies Linking Words
instead
.
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In addition
to that, the government can benefit from Linking Words
this
contribution by using it to solve environmental problems. Linking Words
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can be used Linking Words
in preserving
the environment. They can implement projects Change preposition
to preserve
such
as purifying the air and water, and other measures that can contribute to a healthy ecosystem. Linking Words
For example
, they can redirect the money to planting trees. Linking Words
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measure does not only improve the air quality but Linking Words
also
helps with flooding. Linking Words
Thus
, implementing more Linking Words
taxes
on companies that use fossil fuels has significant benefits.
In conclusion, using fossil fuels can have detrimental effects on the world. Use synonyms
Thus
, I believe that implementing a high rate of taxation in companies has a positive effect. Linking Words
This
can help them to use alternative sources of Linking Words
energy
and the money can be used is environmental conservation.Use synonyms
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