The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
The line graphs compare the
food
and oil
prices globally over an 11-year period
between 2000 and 2011.
Overall
, it is clear that
both lines follow a similar trend. Also
, the prices of food
and oil
experienced a significant rise with a strong correlation of 93.6% during the period
shown.
In 2000, the index
of food
prices was about 90 points, increasing gradually until 2002, and then
dipped after almost 6 months, reaching its lowest value during the whole period
. By contrast
, the average price
of oil
all over the world was just under 30 dollars per barrel, doing the same as the food
trend hitting a trough in 2002. Afterwards, it recovered, rising stably until 2007.
In 2007, both line graphs started to rise rapidly, peaking in the middle of 2008 at roughly 230 points and 130 dollars per barrel for the global food
price
index
and the average price
of oil
, respectively. Then
, the figures plummeted by almost 40% in the food
price
index
and 60% in the average oil
price
. Finally
, they both rose strikingly; however
, the trend for points of the food
price
index
reached it's
highest value over the whole Correct your spelling
its
period
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