Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many individuals argue that the loss of a particular group of
plants
and animals
today is a major environmental issue. While
others believe that there are more big environmental problems
. In my opinion, people should be prepared for other environmental problems
rather than worrying about losing some living beings
species.
Extinction of living organisms
can impact natural balance. If the whole family of animals
and plants
disappears, it will create an imbalance in the ecosystem as it affects other living beings
' inhabitants and causes mass extinction of the other animals
and plants
too. For example
, honey
bees are responsible for pollination, so that the plants
can produce fruits and the honey
made by honey
bees is the source of food for other animals
and human beings
too. Once, the honey
bees vanish from the earth whole living organisms
may exist due to
a lack of food. Hence
, it is necessary to protect endangered species so that there will be balance in nature and other organisms
can survive too.
Mankind should focus on stopping another disaster in order to prevent mass extinction. There are major environmental disaster problems
like global warming which impact the earth's temperature, and climate and are responsible for ozone layer depletion as it can vanish all living beings
from the planet. Its process is slow and unnoticeable but it will show its result in decades even in a century. For instance
, recent data from WHO(World Health Organization) carried out in 2023 provided that due to
the global warming impact, the temperate rises every 1 degree Celsius in 4 years which will become 60 degrees Celcius in 50 years if the temperature rises to 50 degrees Celsius, many animals
and plants
species will die out. To solve this
problem planting trees and increasing forest area are essential since they can protect animals
, plants
and human beings
.
In conclusion, every living being plays a vital role in nature and it is important to preserve all living beings
. But there are other main environmental problems
. Individuals should make strategies to overcome other major environmental issues like global warming,
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task achievement
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite