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The maps give information about a university sports court.

The maps give information about a university sports court.
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The maps compare the changes that have taken place at a university sports court since its first construction in 1990 and
present
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the present
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.
Overall
, there was a major
changes
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 in the provided facility with a prominent development, albeit with the decreasing of open spaces. At the outset of the period, there
was
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were
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 only two
exercising
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exercise
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facility
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facilities
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, namely
Tennis
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a Tennis
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 Court and
Outdoor
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an Outdoor
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 Pool.
However
, the park and car park were available to almost half of the areas. Over the
three decades
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three-year
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 period, there
is
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has been
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 an increase in the number of
the
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apply
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establishment
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establishments
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,
along with
 the absence of the open field. At present, there are
a
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apply
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slight changes with the athletic complex
such
 as the adjustment of
outdoor
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the outdoor
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 pool to an indoor arena, the doubled area of
tennis
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the tennis
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center
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centre
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 and the expanded room for changing space. New sites
also
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were also
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 constructed including
Basketball
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a Basketball
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 field and
Fitness
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a Fitness
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 centre.
On the other hand
, the location that remained the same since 1990 is the Reception and Cafe.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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