The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes that occurred on an island by building facilities for tourism.
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,before the
constructions
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, there was nothing but a vast land with some palm trees in it.
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,the after image indicates a new restaurant , accommodations and other facilities.What is more interesting is that the palm trees were not moved or cut from their place. As can be observed, a new swimming place is added next to the beach area.
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, a new footpath from the beach to the six newly built accommodations on the left
side
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of the island followed by a reception building in the centre with vehicle tracks around it which are connected to a restaurant and the pier that has 2 boats on each
side
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of it.
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, nine more residencies were constructed on the other
side
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of the reception centre and surprisingly, all
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this
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new buildings have footpaths in front of them like the other one on the left
side
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.
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, it must be mentioned that two palm trees on the left
side
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and nine on the right
side
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of the island remained untouched.
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