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The popularity of online education has grown significantly in the recent years.Do you think this positive or negative development.

#popularity #education #years #development
Over the
last
 few years, online
education
 become very famous and many people prefer studying online
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 offline because that
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 advantages their lifetime.
However
,it can have some disadvantages as well in
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 discuss both
positive
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 and negative sides of
this
 and draw a conclusion. On the one hand,there are several benefits
online
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education
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in humans
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humans
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 life because
provide
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 opportunities and facilities for
students
such
 as they can both
work
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 and studying .To explain, nowadays many
students
while
 studying time they can engaging other jobs.
As a
result
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 improving economic progress
as well as
 enriching experiences for future careers .
For example
,
according to
 a recent survey
last
 decades many
youngers
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youngsters
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learning online courses
than
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 offline
education
.Cause of that comfort
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students
also
they studying
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study
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 online
foreign
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at foreign
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countries'
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countries
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famous
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Universities. As
consequence
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, developing online
education
offer
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offers
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 several positives for
students
.
On the other hand
, despite
mentioned
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 positives
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of online
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online
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education
but
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there are some downsides
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it
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is
that
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lack
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a lack
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 of
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practices
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 for children and teachers
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not
control
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their
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doing
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tasks.
That is
,if school pupils
learning
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 online they do not
practices
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practice
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in as
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as
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classrom
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classroom
classrooms
 and teachers do not display their teaching skills
Moreover
, they do not encourage children during online lessons.
As a result
 many young generations
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not
enough
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 knowledge during school time .
Moreover
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 they even commit minor
reduce they
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 knowledge rate than offline
education
.
Therefore
, online
education
not
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 beneficial for school pupils cause
of
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teachers do not supervise them during
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lessons
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. In conclusion,
while
 online
education
 can offer several positives there may be some drawbacks too.From my personal point of view
advantages
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the advantages
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 of
this
 outweigh the disadvantages.
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