Exposure to international media such as films, TV and megazines has significant impact on local culture. What do you think has been the impact? Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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have
brought new ideas and cultures into people's Change the verb form
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First,
let us consider the positive impact on local culture by international Linking Words
media
by providing free or Use synonyms
low cost
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low-cost
videos
to remote areas. Use synonyms
For instance
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in recent years have demonstrated the effect of climate change on water scarcity in all Use synonyms
the
parts of the world and Correct article usage
apply
urge
farmers to move towards organic farming which could be Wrong verb form
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solution
to the problem. Add an article
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farmers around the world which in turn Change preposition
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reduce
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using disinformation as Use synonyms
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In addition
, it will create distrust and Linking Words
voilence
among the people of the country. Correct your spelling
violence
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videos
are very destructive and should be regulated by the government.
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advantages
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outweigh the disadvantages. But to Change the verb form
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the full benefit of it, we need to regulate it as well. Verb problem
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. In the end, I want to add that all types of Use synonyms
media
are mere tools and should be carefully used for building new things rather than destruction.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Make sure your introduction clearly presents the topic and your opinion on it. A more direct statement about the overall impact and your stance on the advantages and disadvantages would offer clarity.
coherence cohesion
In the body paragraphs, systematically discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Each paragraph should focus on a specific aspect, clearly delineated from each other.
task achievement
Use more diverse and specific examples to support your arguments. While you mention climate change and hate speech, further detailing or additional examples could strengthen your position.
coherence cohesion
Improve the coherence of your essay by using a wider range of linking phrases and transitional words to better connect ideas and paragraphs.
task achievement
Conclude your essay by summarizing the main points and restating your opinion on the overall impact, making your stance clear and emphasizing the significance of your argument.
coherence cohesion
Proofread your essay for any grammatical mistakes or typos to enhance its overall clarity and professionalism.
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