The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to the
process
of producing Use synonyms
chocolate
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
process
commences with growing Use synonyms
cacao
trees Use synonyms
then
harvesting, preparing Linking Words
beans
, Use synonyms
transporting
them to factories culminating in a manufacturing procedure to make Correct word choice
and transporting
chocolate
.
The initial phase focuses on preparing the raw ingredients from Use synonyms
cacao
trees to transport them to factories. The Use synonyms
process
begins when the Use synonyms
cacao
trees are grown for their red pods which are harvested when ripe. Use synonyms
Next,
the white Linking Words
beans
are taken and fermented, Use synonyms
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subsequently
they are spread in the sun to dry. The ensuing stage involves packaging the dried Add a comma
subsequently,
beans
into sacks before being transported to the factory by truck.
Moving on to the subsequent stages where the Use synonyms
cacao
Use synonyms
beans
are turned into Use synonyms
chocolate
ready for consumption. Once the Use synonyms
beans
have been transported to the factory, they move on to the manufacturing stages. Use synonyms
To begin
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with
they are roasted at 350°C Add a comma
with,
then
they are crushed to remove the outer shell. The whole Linking Words
process
terminates when Use synonyms
inner
part is pressed resulting in liquid Add an article
the inner
an inner
chocolate
that can be used to make different Use synonyms
chocolate
products.Use synonyms
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