Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A
lot
of countries already started to face challenges not only related to the environment but also
regarding population
and education. With the ever-increasing population
, there will be a lot
of drawbacks that should be faced by these countries. In this
essay, I will discuss the problems
that could be faced by my country in the coming decade, and also
how to overcome these issues.
Firstly
, India is now the most populated country in the world. With the ever-increasing population
, the production of waste has also
increased in recent years, which has led to environmental damage. If it continues like this
, there might be a lot
of problems
that may arise. The most important one is the lack of resources. With the ever growth of population
, resource consumption has also
peaked in recent times. For example
, I read a survey last
month which states that basic resources like groundwater will be completely consumed in the next decade. Secondly
, a lot
of people are well-educated now. Therefore
, they are moving to cities for their career growth, and the people who chose farming for their livelihood have been reduced drastically. Due to
this
scarcity of food might arise.
In order to overcome these problems
, people should educate themselves about the importance of the environment and should decrease the amount of waste they produce. This
can be achieved by introducing some environmental courses in academics and educating the younger generations on topics like global warming. Moreover
, the public who are educated should learn some farming techniques, and how to apply them successfully. For Instance
, I recently saw my sister's geographic textbook, and the institution has included a lot
of measures that should be followed to reduce the impacts of global warming.
To conclude
, It should be the responsibility of everyone to understand the upcoming challenges that should be faced relating to the environment, population
growth, and education. Furthermore
, the population
should implement the necessary steps to eradicate the problems
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