Education is a critical element of the prosperity of any nation. The more educated people in a country are, the more successful their nation becomes.” Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.

Many are of the opinion that a

country

where most of the population is highly educated, the more successful the nation itself will be. I agree with

this

statement and will explain why in

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essay.

Firstly

, higher education in economics and engineering allows people to be ready to tackle

growth

drivers like infrastructure and banking sectors, which are

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factors for any

country

’s

growth

.

For example

, nations where the banking system allows the government to fund big infrastructure projects to shorten the distances

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richer and poorer sides of the

country

will allow economic

growth

in the less developed areas and provide skilled workers to the wealthier ones who are developing faster.

Secondly

,

well educated

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politicians are more adapted to change and challenges; a

country

where most of the political leaders are

well suited

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to tackle complex challenges

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is prone to face more complex situations and find

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way to fix or improve their status.

For instance

, the Senate of a

country

where the politicians have a better educational background

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will have an easier job

to approve

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new laws, because the stages where the bills were born have been discussed more deeply and with

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chances

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discarded at the

last

minute, allowing the government to adapt to social changes faster and better. In conclusion, I agree with the fact that education is a critical element of prosperity for those nations who embrace it, allowing both

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and social accelerated

growth

as shown in the previous examples. I hope that all

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countries will embrace

this

idea because a world where education is accessible and affordable everywhere is destined to experience the advantages of

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global wealth at scale.