The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
The
given
table chart highlights the information about Verb problem
apply
average
distance travelled Correct article usage
the average
by
per person in Change preposition
apply
miles
per year by different modes of travel in England from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
, the most used transport vehicle is car
and Correct article usage
a car
least
is Correct article usage
the least
taxi
. People Add an article
a taxi
the taxi
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
used bicycle
in 1985 which Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
decread
in 2000 which is Correct your spelling
decreased
decreed
same
for local buses.
The average distance travelled by people Correct article usage
the same
in
train and taxi which Change preposition
by
is
289 and 13 Wrong verb form
was
miles
in 1995 increased to 366 and 42 miles
in 2000. But there is also
decrease
in Correct article usage
a decrease
usage
of transport vehicles like Correct article usage
the usage
bicycle
and local Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
business
from 51 and 429 Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
miles
in 1995 to 41 to 274 miles
in 2000.
The usage of car
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the car
is
skyrocketed even in 1985 Unnecessary verb
apply
as
3199 Change preposition
to
miles
to 2000 as 4806 miles
. Some other transport facilities and long distance
Add a hyphen
long-distance
bus
rose from 450 and 54 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
miles
to 585 and 124 in the span of 15 years. Walking is
done by many people in 1985 Wrong verb form
was
as
255 Change preposition
at
miles
dropping to 237 miles
in 2000.Submitted by akshayashvi07 on
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